New required fixes

docs/docs/FAQ/Assets-FAQ.md

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ For now, it doesn't.
 
 ### Does Immich support filtering of NSFW images?
 
-It seems that, this option is not implemented, but it seems that there is an [open discussion about it
+This option is not implemented, but there is an [open discussion about it
 On Github](https://github.com/immich-app/immich/discussions/2451). You can submit a pull request or vote for the discussion.
 
 ### Why are there so many thumbnail generation jobs?
@@ -47,12 +47,12 @@ All machine learning jobs and thumbnail images are recreated.
 No. There was a discussion about this in the past but it was [rejected](https://github.com/immich-app/immich/pull/1242), there is an [unofficial way to achieve this](https://gist.github.com/JamesCullum/6604e504318dd326a507108f59ca7dcd).
 
 :::danger
-If you do choose to use unofficial way, it's important to be aware of the following security risks:
+If you do choose to use the unofficial way, it's important to be aware of the following security risks:
 
 - The golang:1.19.4-alpine3.17 base image was released a year ago and has [18 vulnerabilities for OpenSSL](https://hub.docker.com/layers/library/golang/1.19.4-alpine3.17/images/sha256-8b532e4f43b6ccab31b2542d132720aa6e22f6164e0ed9d4885ef2d7c8b87aa5?context=explore)
-- The image `ghcr.io/jamescullum/multipart-upload-proxy:main` was last released long time ago and has vulnerable versions of OpenSSL and libwebp.
+- The image `ghcr.io/jamescullum/multipart-upload-proxy:main` was last updated a long time ago and has vulnerable versions of OpenSSL and libwebp.
 - The vips-dev package relies on libwebp, which had a major CVE a few months ago.
-there may be other vulnerabilities as well.
+There may be other vulnerabilities as well.
 :::
 
 ### How can I move all data (photos, persons, albums) from one user to another?

docs/docs/FAQ/External-Library-FAQ.md

@@ -4,15 +4,15 @@ sidebar_position: 5
 
 # External Library
 
-### Can I add an external library while keeping the existing album structure?
+### Can I add an external library while keeping the existing albums structure?
 
-We haven't put in an official mechanism to create album from your external library yet, but there are some [workarounds from the community](https://github.com/immich-app/immich/discussions/4279) which you can find here to help you achieve that.
+We haven't put in an official mechanism to create albums from external libraries at the moment., but there are some [workarounds from the community](https://github.com/immich-app/immich/discussions/4279) which you can find here to help you achieve that.
 
 ### I got duplicate files in the upload library and the external library
 
 It is important to remember that Immich does not filter duplicate files from [external Library](/docs/features/libraries) at the moment.
 
-Upload library and external library different mechanism to detect duplicates:
+Upload library and external library use different mechanisms to detect duplicates:
 
 - Upload library: hashes the file
 - External library: uses the file path

docs/docs/FAQ/Machine-Learning-FAQ.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ sidebar_position: 6
 
 ### How does smart search work?
 
-Immich uses CLIP models, for more information about CLIP and its capabilities can be [read here](https://openai.com/research/clip).
+Immich uses CLIP models, for more information about CLIP and its capabilities. Read about it [here](https://openai.com/research/clip).
 
 ### How does facial recognition work?
 
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ No, this is not supported. Only models listed in the [Huggingface](https://huggi
 You can change to a multilingual model listed [here](https://huggingface.co/collections/immich-app/multilingual-clip-654eb08c2382f591eeb8c2a7) by going to Administration > Machine Learning Settings > Smart Search and replacing the name of the model. Be sure to re-run Smart Search on all assets after this change. You can then search in over 100 languages.
 
 :::note
-feel free to make a feature request if there's a model you want to use that isn't in Immich Huggingface list.
+Feel free to make a feature request if there's a model you want to use that isn't in [Immich Huggingface list](https://huggingface.co/immich-app).
 :::
 
 ### Does Immich support Facial Recognition for videos ?

docs/docs/FAQ/Performance-FAQ.md

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ You can do it by:
 5. Change the settings as needed
 
 :::danger
-On a normal machine, 2 or 3 concurrent jobs can probably max the CPU, so if you're not hitting those maximums with, say, 30 jobs,
+On a normal machine, 2 or 3 concurrent jobs can probably max the CPU, so if you're not hitting those maximums with, say, 30 jobs.
 Note that storage speed and latency may quickly become the limiting factor; particularly when using HDDs.
 
 Do not exaggerate with the amount of jobs because you're probably thoroughly overloading the server.